Gave the book to a brother and sister that are nine and twelve years old, and avid readers. According to their parents they couldn't put it down and the kids told me they loved it. They especially liked the cliffhangers at the end of every chapter.
BUT! (There's always a but isn't there?) When I reviewed my rewrite, I still found work that needed to be done. So, I fixed that and now I'm happy with everything but the critical first ten pages. We all know how perfect those have to be. Hopefully, my writing group can give me their thoughts. Maybe it's just me.
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